https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y0g7CjH8fTU&feature=youtu.be
The feedback that I have received over the past two elevator pitches was useful to me in making this final third elevator pitch. The primary thing I was told in feedback was to make sure I am being dynamic and focused on the pitch, which I tried to do even more in this elevator pitch. Overall, people seem to think that my idea is solid and that I have found the right demographic to focus on for my idea. Feedback definitely helped me improve my elevator pitch.
Hey Jordan! I really like your idea for your business! I think that this has a lot of potential to make a lot of money some day. I really like what you did with the improvements you made from your last elevator pitch! Definitely don't give up on this dream because I personally think that a lot of people would benefit from what you are offering! Check out my blog: https://www.blogger.com/blogger.g?blogID=2458344027561127149#allposts
ReplyDeleteHey Jordan! I love the idea for your app. I've been struggling to get one question answered by advising this week. I think this app would definitely have a big market. Nice job! Here's the link to mine http://ufent3003.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-3-week-10.html
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